WALT: Write 100 in 10 minutes
this week we had to write 100 words in 10 minutes this quick write was quick and we do this every week but this is my story about the man.
In the cold dark night, the wind blew and a man showed up. He was standing tall with a light shining behind him, he made sure no one saw his face. He moved quickly and quietly. Then he saw an opened window and he jumped into it as soon as he got through he found a broken door. He then quickly broke it down and investigated the home but to his surprise, no one was there. He looked out the front door and found footsteps with a pool of blood next to them. Then he thought that´s strange. Went inside and closed the door knock knock
"Hello anyone home"
"check the front door" 112 words
Kia ora Lucian,
ReplyDeleteMy favourite part is your opening line because it hooked me and made me want to keep reading your story. When I read your post I learnt that you are good at writing stories that keep you guessing and wondering what will happen next? Maybe look back and re-craft your writing to make sure it uses punctuation and makes sense all the way to the end. Keep up the great work Lucian! Ms Peters